Very nice first stanza.I love it all the way up to the last stanza. The last stanza doesn't work with the rest of the poem. I like what you're saying there, but work on the rhythm and diciton.
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Very nice first stanza.
I love it all the way up to the last stanza. The last stanza doesn't work with the rest of the poem. I like what you're saying there, but work on the rhythm and diciton.
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